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Tattoonie - a place where my mother takes care of me.
I am a slave.
My mother and I are the property of Watto. He own's a fix it shop.
People break it -- I fix it. Watto also makes me join in the pod races.
I'm the only human that can do it.
I dream of the day I will fly away from Tattooine and become a Jedi.
I don't know how this will happen. I just know it will.

One day you come walking into my world. You are Jedi Master
Qui-Gon Jinn. You need parts for your space ship. Watto makes a
deal with you If I win the pod race, I'm free to leave with you.
You want to take my mother also. Watto won't allow it. I win the race
and you get to take me with you in your space ship. I want my mom
to come also. She tells me that it is ok to leave. I don't like change.
I want things to stay the same.

I find myself standing in front of the Jedi Council. They are debaiting
on wether or not to train me as a Jedi. They tell Qui-Gon that
I will not be trained. Qui-Gon states that he will have to
train me himself. Master Yoda objects. An apprentance you
already have. Impossable for you to have two.
Obi-Wan is ready for the trials. Qui-Gon says. I'm taking on a new apprentace. Qui-Gon will die before he can trully begin to train me. My training will take place under newly appointed Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi.

10yrs later
I'm nineteen now. I have learned a great deal from
Master Obi-Wan. I want to go thru the trails. I want to prove that
I'm a Jedi Knight. I want the council to look at me not with disdain.
I want the council to look at me with approvel. I want them to see what
Qui-Gon saw. A Jedi Knight. The one who will bring balance to the force.

You walk back into my life. You are Senator Padme Amidala.
I am givin the task of escorting you back to your home on Naboo, after
someone tries to kill you upon your arrival to Coruscant.
I finally get a chance to prove to the Council that I'm ready to become
a Jedi Knight.

A Jedi is to have no personal attachmenats. A Jedi is to give up all
material things. A Jedi is to live a life of service to the order.

I have nightmears about my mother while I'm watching over Padme.
I don't know what I'm supposed to do. I have a duty to keep Padme safe.

Padme and I are also falling in love.
I tell Padme that I need to go and find my mother. I need to know that she is safe. Padme says she will go with me. Padme has as way of keeping me calm.
Padme and I go to Tatooine looking for my mother. We find that she's
been taken by Tuskin Raiders. They are holding her in their camp.
I go to rescue her. I find her. She dies in my arms.
All I feal is RAGE.
I slaughter the entire camp. Men, Women, children. My rage is my power.
Rage feels really gooooood. I feeds my power in the force.
I confess my slaughter to Padme. She tells me that being angry is human.
"I'm a Jedi." " I know I'm better than this."

She and I marry in a quiet ceremony. C3-PO and R-2 are the only witnesses.

3rys later
I'm a Jedi Knight. The hero without fear.
I have just rescued Chanclor Palpatine from General Grevious.
I'm walking on cloud nine. I see Master Windu. He makes me feel
very small. He doesn't approve of me. I know I'm better then he is.
I could take him anyday.

Padme tells me she's pregnet. She and I are going to be parents. I start having nightmears of her dying in childbirth. After loosing my mother, I am
determined not let this one come true.
I start to embrace my anger and hatred for the Jedi Council. They want me to spy on my friend Palpatine.
I hate the idea. I defend the Chancellor to Obi-Wan. I feel he presures me into the request. My rage and anger only start to grow inside me.
This time not even Padme can silence the rage inside me.

I find out that the Chancellor is a Sith Lord. He is also my friend.
I make the choice to help him destory Master Windu. I make the choice
to become the most feared Sith Lord in the galaxey.
I forget how to be the hero. He is dead to me.
I'm going to enjoy the power. I'm going to enjoy being a Sith Lord.

I am on my way to the Jedi Temple. My new master has ordered me
to kill all the Jedi within the temple. I have NO troulble doing this.
I slaughter padawan, after padawan. I slaughter Knight after Knight.
I find a room with younlings. One of them asks me " Master Skywalker,
there are too many of them. What are we going to do." I ignight my
lightsaber. I feel no remorse about what I have done.

I go home to check on Padme and the baby. She is upset. She can see the Jedi Temple burning from her appartment. I want to tell her that I did it.
I burnet the temple. I don't dare. The Jedi are the evil ones. She will not
understand. I just tell her that everthing will be alright. All she needs to do is
wait for me until I return. We will be happy.

I'm on Mustafar. I have just wipped out Nute Gunray and all his "friends."
I am reflecting on all that has happened.

You show up. What are you doing here. I told you to stay home.
You come running to me. You tell me that Obi-Wan came to see you.
He told you what I did at the Jedi Temple. I don't deny it. I just look at
you and tell you we don't need to runaway anymore. Everthing will be
fine. I want you to join me in my quest to rule the Galaxey.
You start telling me about how Obi-Wan was right. I have changed.
You don't know me. I am angry. I don't want to hear about Obi-Wan.
I just want you.
I see Obi-Wan walking off YOUR ship. I start screaming at you. Why did you
have to bring him here. You are on HIS side.

I have a fight with Obi-Wan. I get the upper hand. He gets the upper hand.
He tells me not to try jumping. It will not work. I tell him not to underestamate my new power.

He cuts my arm. He cuts my legs. I fall to the ground. He tells me that
I was the chosen one. I was to bring balance to force. Not leave it in darkness.

I am burning. I can feel the lava tear my skin from my bones. I am determind not to die. My hatered for Obi-Wan and my love of my new powers keep me from dieing.

I am awake now. I have been put into a suite. I ask about Padme.
Sidious tells me that in my anger I killed her. I am Darth Vader.

20rys go by

One day I meet a student of Obi-Wan's. His name is Luke.
Whom does he remind me of? I know there is something about him.
What is it? I see her face. I hear her voice. NO! They died. 20rys ago.
I refuse to admit the posability. I know it's there. I can taste it.

No. I am Darth Vader. Luke will be my apprentace. He will help me destory the Emper. He will learn to embrace the dark side.

I was wrong. Luke would rather die, than join the dark side.
I hear him tell my master " I am a Jedi. Like my father before me."

I am awake now. I must help my son. I must become the hero again.
Sidious his killing my son. It all comes back to me. I let all the memories come flooding back. Dooku. Mace. All of it. I trow my master over the
railing. He is dead.

Where am I? I'm on a ship with my son. I'm dying. I beg my son to take my
mask off. I want to look upon him with my own eyes before I die.
He says that he must save me. I tell him he already has. Please let me look at you with my own eyes.


I see my son. My daughter. Their friends.
I am at peace. I am with old friends. Master Yoda. Master Obi-Wan.
I am Anakin Skywalker -- Jedi Knight and father.