A side note: After Plagueis rips off the lid to the tomb, he becomes ill for a moment. I meant to go back and write that in, but I never did. It's important for events later on in the story.

Also, I'm sorry to say that everyone's comments for part one were deleted due to my blog being blocked. If you'd like to leave them again, I'd appreciate it.

Nice job. Left comments on your page. Loving the writing. Keep it up cuz looking for more entries.

vadersgirl33

Also, I'm sorry to say that everyone's comments for part one were deleted due to my blog being blocked. If you'd like to leave them again, I'd appreciate it.

I pointed out the Plagueis novel (cancelled) said Plagueis is a Muun. In part on you did a description of Plagueis where his nose sticks out past his cloak, and Muun's have pretty small noses. Its a minor point of course!

I like part 2 as well, good stuff, looking forward to more!

The beginning of this part reminds me of the X-Files! You know, the black oil?

I like this Tam character, too. He made me laugh. He was probably my favorite part of this section, actually. We'll see what he does next....

Loving the writing. Keep it up cuz looking for more entries.
Thank you! And believe me, more entries are on the way. Maybe more entries than you can stand LOL

I pointed out the Plagueis novel (cancelled) said Plagueis is a Muun.
Oh yes! I was hoping you'd send that back. First, I started this project about six months to a year before the Plagueis project was announced (I just about had a coronary the day the article appeared), so by all rights mine came first and should be regarded as the truth! Just kidding. Second, everything about that project was scrapped, so in my opinion Plagueis's appearance, race, etc. has never been determined, and open for interpretation. Just for the record, I based his looks on Lord Voldemort-J.k> Rowling's version, not the films'.

The beginning of this part reminds me of the X-Files!
That scene where the bugs crawl under Palps's skin was inspired by one of my favorite episodes, War of the Cophrages (I mispelled that). In it, some kids are doing drugs, and a kid watches as cockroaches burrow into his wrist and crawl up his arm. Classic.

I like this Tam character, too. He made me laugh. He was probably my favorite part of this section, actually. We'll see what he does next....
Out of the frying pan, into the fire

Comedy's not really my thing

You're kiddin', right? You're one of the funniest dudes online!

I liked Tam. The level of humor was appropriate without being over the top like Jar Jar.

As for Plagueis as a Muun, that has been established by another source. The Jedi and Sith Guide (The Essential Guide to the Force), now has a picture of Palpatine training under Darth Plagueis. Parts of the picture I'm referencing can be found on wookieepedia.

Another good entry.

You're kiddin', right? You're one of the funniest dudes online!
No, YOU'RE one of the funniest guys online. I'm just a hack that makes funny remarks based on what you've already written.

As for Plagueis as a Muun, that has been established by another source.
Hmmm, I can't argue much with that, I guess. I guess I'll just play the part of GL and use "creative license" as my defense

I went and read that wookieepedia entry-Very enlightening! It's also interesting to note that my story falls more or less in line with what is written there. And small details like Plagueis as a Muun can be easily changed, anyway

I went and read that wookieepedia entry
I'm not a writer, but I do know it has enough info to help potential writers of SW lit. Don't be shy about using it. If I was a writer, I definitely would- especially to keep things in line with what has already been written.
Good luck!!!!

vadersgirl33

If I was a writer, I definitely would- especially to keep things in line with what has already been written.
To be completely honest, I like to keep in line with the SW canon, but I'm not terribly concerned if I veer away from it a little bit. With that said, wookieepedia definitely is a starting point for SW writers.

And small details like Plagueis as a Muun can be easily changed

That's a job for the casting director, anyway.

My favorite part was when Tam was firmly planting his foot in his mouth by commenting on the foolishness of beliving the Sith legends, but before he could go too far, Plagueis stopped him by saying, "Shut up!" And what horrible luck; Tam just happens to grab the one bauble the Sith lords actually care about.

That's a job for the casting director, anyway.
True dat LOL

Tam just happens to grab the one bauble the Sith lords actually care about.
Yeah, Tam's luck just keeps getting better from there. LOL

In it, some kids are doing drugs, and a kid watches as cockroaches burrow into his wrist and crawl up his arm. Classic.
I looove that episode!! Things crawling in people...always cool.

I looove that episode!! Things crawling in people...always cool.
Some of the greatest X-Files eps are the really bizarre ones. Another favorite is "Home", the one with the inbreeding family that killed deformed babies and kept their mom under the bed-you know, good family television

I went and read that wookieepedia entry-Very enlightening! It's also interesting to note that my story falls more or less in line with what is written there. And small details like Plagueis as a Muun can be easily changed, anyway

Absolutely. I wouldn't sweat it too much. You've got a good story going.

Ive been playing catch up this morning.

great stuff!

and hey this is YOUR story, so "canon" be danged, wriet what you want!

You're a great writer - I can't wait for more episodes!