Hello, you are not signed on. |
|
![[ Blogs.starwars.com ] [ Blogs.starwars.com ]](/static/skin/default/img/title_banners/site_banner.jpg) ![[ Write A Blog ]](/static/skin/default/img/nav/write_off.gif) ![[ Categories ]](/static/skin/default/img/nav/categories_off.gif) ![[ About Blogs ]](/static/skin/default/img/nav/about_off.gif) ![[ Troubleshooting ]](/static/skin/default/img/nav/troubleshooting_off.gif) 
|


 | Debris in the space between my ears... |
 I don't have a single overriding topic to discuss this time around, so you get a flotsam and jetsam entry today.
The Computer is Dead, Long Live the Computer
My Dell Dimension 2100 died a couple of weeks back. In my part of Texas, we get a fair number of lightning storms, and a doozy of one a while back, which struck while I was away from the house (but my computer was still running) caused a power outage that damaged my power supply and, apparently, the boot drive. Ever after, a warm boot would give me an "unmountable boot volume" error, though cold boots still worked.
More recently, a set of stealth storms — caused by very humid conditions interacting with cooling nighttime temperatures, so there was no warning from the weather radar — resulted in more unexpected power outages, further weakening the system.
But it was still running until a few days ago, when the second hard drive, the data drive, suddenly stopped acknowledging that it was formatted. I was in my second day of fiddling with that when the boot drive decided it would only boot to safe mode, and then only one time in three.
So I bought a replacement, a Dell Dimension B110. It has 2.53GHz speed, 1 gig of RAM, a 160-gig hard drive, and a DVD-RW burner. Because of its status as a "refurb" (actually, it had simply been ordered by someone else and then returned before being opened, thus it's not refurbished at all) and because of a 15% discount I got by scurrilous means, it only ended up costing me $320 plus another $60 for tax and shipping.
I'm very pleased with it so far, but the process of reinstalling all the software and retrieving all the data from backups is taking quite a while.
Okay
Here's my rant for this installment. The word "okay" is not intrinsically evil, but it's distinctly modern. It can kick me out of the subjective reality of a Star Wars novel as fast as Jedi Reeboks, a Han and Leia visit to American Idol, or a cameo appearance by Lindsay Lohan (as herself) would. It all but shrieks, "You're not in a galaxy far far away, you're in your living room with a book in your hand." This makes me crazy, and if you ever see the word in a Star Wars book I've written, it has probably crept in by accident — the odds are very high that I didn't put it there.
So I was wondering whether it had the same effect on other people. Leave me some feedback on this question, okay? Okay.
Philosophical Moosings
I recently read The Dark Moose's eloquent entry on Blue Mod Group about the Talifan. I've known about fans like this for some time, but was disappointed that they'd been dignified with a name that some of them, however misguidedly, might embrace.
On the comments for that entry, Wampa_Jedi asked if I'd ever been the target of trolls like this. Since comments are closed for that blog entry, I thought I'd reply here.
After I temporarily took over the X-Wing series, I received some anonymous hate mail suggesting that my books sucked and that I should die, but it didn't persist. I received some more when, in one of my NJO novels, Kyp Durron opined in internal monologue that he was mightier than Luke, but that largely died down after I had explained the concept of subjective vs. objective point of view for about the thousandth time.
So, no, I haven't yet been the subject of such a campaign. I certainly wouldn't welcome one, but if it happens, I'll deal with it. You take the bad with the good. And if you're lucky, you take the high road as you're doing so.
Book Tour
I'm back from the most recent weekend of my book tour. In Indianapolis, the Bloodfin Garrison of the 501st and members of the Indy Knights put on a great show at the Barnes & Noble at Carmel. In St. Louis, local and midwest chapters of FanForce and the 501st did the same at the Sunset Hills Borders. Everybody made me feel very welcome, and I signed a lot of copies of Betrayal.
Speaking of which, the book has hit the bestseller lists: #41 on USA Today (note that, unlike other bestseller lists, USA Today lumps all categories of books together — hardcover and softcover, nonfiction and fiction), #10 on the New York Times list, and #7 on the Publishers Weekly list. So when nobody's watching, I tend to break out into a Sithly jig from time to time.
While I was in St. Louis, I did a podcast interview for Star Wars Action News, a collectors' show. You can access it from their web site, at http://www.swactionnews.com/. Please note that my part of the show starts about two-thirds of the way in, and I was jacked up on too much early-morning caffeine that day, so I sound a bit, um, rushed. (They should have been playing Flight of the Bumblebees on continuous loop behind me.)
(By the way, the picture at the top of this blog entry is not from either of my booksigning events. The "2700" over Spider-Man's head suggests more than strongly that it's from San Diego Comic-Con.)
That's all for now...
|

 |
http://blogs.starwars.com/aaron_allston/2 |

| |
Master Hei'bbel Señor Chasé's Casa De Force!
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 4:51 PM
Leave it to a state like Texas to have something called a stealth storm, I guess everything is bigger and badder and better down there.
As for the "okay's" and other such our world vocabulary in SW books, I whole heartily agree with you. Even comments like "I'll see you in hell" (even though my boy Han says it!) from the movies kind of get to me which is a very our world our religion term. But they are usually few and far between so it's not a huge deal.
And Aaron you tell me who's sending you hate mail and I'll be sure to send them some made up just for them. ![]:)](http://blogs.starwars.com/share/img/emoticons/devil.gif) I read Betrayal the day it came out and loved every minute of it and same goes for every other SW book you've ever written. Keep up the great work!
MTFBWU
Yub Yub
|

| |
Wampa_Jedi Jedi Wampa's Playhouse
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 4:53 PM
I don't know how much back-and-fourth goes on between SW authors (outside of work), but you should ask Karen Traviss about Dells ( here's an example).
Glad to hear you haven't been attacked to the degree some others have been. I'm embarrased that these people are considered fans, even if it is "psycho fans."
As for things pulling me out of a Star Wars book, the biggest to me (and a real issue with some Prequel novels) are references to other SW stuff. Not like continuity but....an example:
(cont'd)
|
 |
The Stooge Star Wars Joke-A-Day (gone fishin')
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 4:54 PM
And if you're lucky, you take the high road as you're doing so.
From the examples you gave, I'd say that you already know how to take the high road. That alone makes you a lousy target, so you're probably safe. 
|
| |
Wampa_Jedi Jedi Wampa's Playhouse
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 4:56 PM
In Labrynith of Evil, Kenobi shuts down a tractor beam. Someone tells him good job, and he says something like "Not a skill I ever expect to use again, but it worked."
That just seems a little....forced, I guess. I usually roll my eyes a bit and read on.
Words like "Okay," I have to admit I'm a bad reader and would probably just read it and not notice. This is especially true if it's dialogue. If it was in prose somehow, I might notice it more...
Thanks for taking time (again) to talk to us...CYA 'round...
|
 |
Pabawan Fragments from the Mind's Eye
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 4:56 PM
(They should have been playing Flight of the Bumblebees on continuous loop behind me.)
I find that "Saber Dance" makes a suitable alternative.
ph
|
| |
DarthVicomte Vicomte's Blog Extravaganza (Now Defunct)
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:02 PM
don't have a single overriding topic to discuss this time around, so you get a flotsam and jetsam entry today.
Flotsam and jetsam? What a mess, must've been one of those stealth storms.
|
 |
ewanandhaydenfan5 I Have You Now!
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:15 PM
Leave me some feedback on this question, okay?
I really never gave it any thought...it never bothered me. But now that you've mentioned it, I'll have to start paying more attention!
I received some anonymous hate mail suggesting that my books sucked and that I should die
That is really scary, that someone is far gone that they would actually send you, or any other author, something like that.
I'd say that you already know how to take the high road. That alone makes you a lousy target, so you're probably safe.
Absolutely.
|
 |
Dark Spork Sporktastic Voyage
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:15 PM
"Okay" really doesn't have much of an effect on me. In a historical novel, maybe, but in Star Wars? I probably wouldn't notice if it slipped by in dialogue.
As for the Talifans, I've seen some foaming over Jacen in Betrayal, but it's too soon to see if it'll last....
|

 |
jkthunder Seven Pieces
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:20 PM
I'm okay with "okay" - but there are other things that do get to me. Examples: hot chocolate, coffee, tea, carpeting - even though Leia uses the ref in the films. There's something about reading real world terms in the books that make them more... noticeable, less credible maybe. Even though plenty of real world terms are used in all the films!
There's been a recent rise of some chatter in the BCAT forum about the EU-author blame game. Many people are quick to blame continuity points on the authors, forgetting that it has to go through the Lucasbooks staff before publishing anyway. You're just lucky you didn't write Vector Prime
|

 |
NerfHerdersAnonymous Life, the Star Wars Universe and Everything
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:25 PM
So I was wondering whether it had the same effect on other people. Leave me some feedback on this question, okay? Okay.
It is almost cringe-worthy. In books, TV, film, etc. doesn't matter. There is a time and place for "okay" but not anything set before it's arrival or in an out-of-this-world setting. Amazing the power of one word to bring one back from an otherwise pleasurable trip during a read.
I was jacked up on too much early-morning caffeine that day, so I sound a bit, um, rushed. (They should have been playing Flight of the Bumblebees on continuous loop behind me.)
hehe, I wonder if those "jacked up" on caffeine listening that morning thought you sounded just right.
Leah
|

 |
Allston "Pretty. What do we blow up first?"
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:28 PM
Wampa_Jedi said:
I don't know how much back-and-fourth goes on between SW authors (outside of work), but you should ask Karen Traviss about Dells (here's an example).
I've heard a bit about Karen's trouble with Dell. She's had ghastly luck, and she certainly should vote her dollars (well, pounds) and take her business to a company that can sell her a good computer and keep it functioning.
But I've had very good luck with Dell, so I'll keep buying from them until that circumstance changes.
|

| |
Marvolo7 Marvolo's Misanthropic Musings
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:34 PM
Like others have said, I don't think the work "okay" has ever ripped me out of a fictional universe, because I probably fail to notice it. Now that I think about it, "okay" would seem out of place since we never hear the word in Star Wars movies. Still, I would be more likely to notice an entire statement that seemed out of place in the Star Wars universe, or completely out of character for the one speaking.
That being said, I dislike "okay" because there are hundreds of better words to put in its place, regardless of what era you're living in.
|

| |
alshf123 Thoughts from a Squib
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:43 PM
I must admit, I doubt I would catch it if the word okay was slipped in there. I don't think it would bother me if the word was put in a few times, but anything more than that might. I agree with Marvolo, on that the word okay is simply a filler word used when people are lazy and can't think of anything better to say.
|
| |
Wampa_Jedi Jedi Wampa's Playhouse
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:51 PM
I dislike "okay" because there are hundreds of better words to put in its place
Yeah.....authors should use other terms, like "ALLLLLLLLrighty Then!" (In my best Ace Ventura voice). That wouldn't drag ANYONE out of a Star Wars book.
|

| |
Wampa_Jedi Jedi Wampa's Playhouse
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 5:55 PM
One more, then I leave some spots open for someone else.
One thing that gets me in books is repetition. Two authors I greatly enjoy have done this, and it hurts to see.
The first is Tom Clancy's Teeth of the Tiger. That phrase, in some form or another, turns up about every fourth page. "If you grab the tiger's tail, you better know how to deal with the teeth." Okay (hehe), I've got it, move on.
The other is (don't kill me) Michael Stackpole. I believe it was in I, Jedi, it seems he found a new word..."plinth." I love that book (one of my top 10 SW), but he used that word a LOT.
So, that's my thing. Repetition. Did I mention repetition? I'm not a real fan of repetition.
|

 |
hansgirl3 Invoking the Squee
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 7:18 PM
Okay, on "okay"! I don't have a problem with words like okay, personally, because I read the books for the characters and the story, not things like small words of that sort. Not a problem for me at all!
It's a shame that you had to deal with any sort of hate mail issues, or that any other of our authors have had to. It sounds as though you are certainly prepared to "take the high road" though and that is fantastic. I hope you never have any severe problems with this issue!
|
| |
rj_peters Memos from the Imperial Finance Department
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 8:15 PM
Congratulations on hitting the best seller lists. It is much deserved and I hope Betrayal sticks around up there for a while. I hope to help contribute to your hand cramp when you hit Fort Worth a couple weekends from now.
|
 |
jedigrrl1
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 9:17 PM
As a veteran of Texas weather and poorly circuited apartments, I would highly recommend the aquisition of an Uninterruptable Power Supply, or UPS. Belkin and APM make several models in prices from 'cheap' to 'oh-my-deity'. UPS regulate the powerflow to your machine and protect against spikes and surges much better than your average power strip.
I very much enjoyed 'Betrayal' and you treated my favorite lady villian with the respect and care I had hoped for. Her present skills and behaviors can easily be seen as natural growth from when we last saw her.
|

 |
Jedi Master Mina Jedi blogging, go back to your drinks!
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 10:41 PM
Funny you mention about the word "okay", because I honestly don't think that I have ever seen that word in novels.
I have an awfully pretty and shiny new Dell XP...Love it!!...*coughspaidcoughsmuchmorecoughsthancoughs$350*...What can I say...I'm not a bargain shopper.
Looking forward to your next SW book....BTW, don't kill off Luke, or I will have to throw myself on my lightsaber (teehee). I use this liver on everything...It's great!!
|
 |
Jedi Master Mina Jedi blogging, go back to your drinks!
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 10:43 PM
I use this liver on everything...It's great!!
Gorran trigger finger...I meant to say "I use this LINE on everything"...Where did I get liver? I don't even like liver...What the hell was I thinking...
|
| |
Wampa_Jedi Jedi Wampa's Playhouse
|
date Posted: Jun 13, 2006 11:21 PM
What can I say...I'm not a bargain shopper.
If it makes ya feel better, Mina, I'm in the same boat. I've got a notebook that, for the first time, is fuctioning as my main system. I went to about 3, 4 stores and then nabbed it...I fall easy for "instant gratification" rather than "wait for a sale or deal."
|

 |
Allston "Pretty. What do we blow up first?"
|
date Posted: Jun 14, 2006 5:46 AM
jedigrrl1 said:
As a veteran of Texas weather and poorly circuited apartments, I would highly recommend the aquisition of an Uninterruptable Power Supply, or UPS. Belkin and APM make several models in prices from 'cheap' to 'oh-my-deity'. UPS regulate the powerflow to your machine and protect against spikes and surges much better than your average power strip.
I'm familiar with UPSes. Unfortunately, the last few purchased by members of my household (including one of the brands you mention) have been essentially useless when push came to shove, so I've held off on buying one.
|

 |
JMMC
|
date Posted: Jun 14, 2006 5:57 AM
I don't know if ok really fits coming out of the mouth of SW character, but I wouldn't mind it too much. Personally, I tend to prefer dialogue that sounds like people actually having a conversation, as opposed to characters speaking like no one ever does. I always thought that so much of the criticism of the prequels would've gone away if the dialogue wasn't so unnatural.
I remember making note of "plinth" because it was used a lot and I had to look it up. I consider myself a fairly well-educated person, but I just never heard the word. This may be better for a another blog topic, but I hate when an author uses too many obscure, "big words". I don't like dumbed-down writing, but you have to make sure readers understand you...
JMM
|
| |
mandomadman Journal of a Mandalorian Madman
|
date Posted: Jun 14, 2006 6:57 AM
Allston, I loe your books. Have you ever made it as far into the interior as Corpus Christi?
|
 |
RojoTrooper Star Wars Recycled Art Project
|
date Posted: Jun 14, 2006 6:48 PM
Aaron,
Maybe it was a robot who thought he was a Solo..with magnetic hand to suck the life from your harddrive..UGH.. I hate when they do that..
I am halfway through the book.. I love it..
Finally, Jacen Solo grows a pair..respect.
Noone writes Star Wars like you.. Excluding the exterior, You are Han Solo heart, mind and soul..
CE
|
 |
Allston "Pretty. What do we blow up first?"
|
date Posted: Jun 15, 2006 1:23 AM
Mandomadman said:
Allston, I loe your books. Have you ever made it as far into the interior as Corpus Christi?
Unfortunately not; I've never been closer than San Antonio.
|
 |
The Dark Moose Moose Poodoo
|
date Posted: Jun 15, 2006 10:36 PM
Ah, Texas lightning. The bane of solid state electronics.
I've seen lightning split a tree, jump from root to pipes to wiring and then blow garage door opener bits into an unsuspecting Dalmation's tuckus.
Yep...I've seen fire and I've seen rain... I've seen a dog that'll never go in a garage again....
DM out
|
| |
AnAkAiNsOlO Star Wars: The Final Frontier
|
date Posted: Jun 16, 2006 1:28 AM
Aaron, I am reading Betrayal and am loving it! you have done an awesom job, and hope to see you around the Books, Comics and television forum as much as karen,  .
|
 |
MasterObi-Wan My little slice of the GFFA
|
date Posted: Jun 16, 2006 1:27 PM
Gotta love new computers. I'm thinking about getting one myself...
Can't wait to see you at the Borders in Fort Worth! I just need to get my copy of Betrayal back from the girl I'm lending it to! Otherwise, I might just have to buy a second copy...
|
| |
v'TaiakEth "I need to do some emergency gloating." ~Han Solo
|
date Posted: Jun 16, 2006 7:47 PM
here's a question: WHEN ARE YOU COMING TO UTAH? There are many very big fans of comedy and SW here and we feel very neglected. I've even got a nice Texan so you don't feel left out!
As for the Betrayal errors, I was reading Destiny's Way and noticed that another author kinda changed the race of Jaina's copilot three times and once changed the gender.
I haven't had a heart attack like I did for the ending of Betrayal since...let's see... Harry Potter 3.
|

 |
DJ Maul: Got Feet? DJ Maul's Dancin' Cantina Party
|
date Posted: Jun 16, 2006 11:05 PM
Hey, off topic but I just wanted to say I just finished Betrayal and thought it was really good.
I dont read a lot of EU, only a few in fact, but I think I will be along for the rest of the "Legacy" ride thanks to the great start.
Im not as familiar with the character as Jacen Solo as some so I suppose I didnt have as much invested in him to be "shocked" by his decision, but it's an interesting path this series has chosen. Well done.
cont:
|

 |
DJ Maul: Got Feet? DJ Maul's Dancin' Cantina Party
|
date Posted: Jun 16, 2006 11:06 PM
pt 2:
I guess because I havent kept up I am a little surprised at how OLD everyone is...but I suppose its better that time passes rather than the "no one ever changes/ages/dies" scenario...that gets rather dull after awhile.
as for "okay," I guess I just never really noticed it...now that you pointed it out to me Im sure I will next time, lol...
you have a new reader...cant wait until the next one.
|

 |
DJ Maul: Got Feet? DJ Maul's Dancin' Cantina Party
|
date Posted: Jun 16, 2006 11:27 PM
One last comment: I agree whole heartedly about the comments made against "trolls" or "talifans" (first time Ive heard that term) ...I have seen more great message boards destroyed by these types becuase their behaviour went unchecked and eventually drove away all the NORMAL fans.
One of the reasons I love the blogs & message boards here is becuase I know that there IS some control as to what is and is not allowed, and it keeps the place so much more civil.
As an author, I cant imagine what you must feel or go through when people like that attack you personally for something that is, in the grand scheme of things, so trivial.
|

 |
DJ Maul: Got Feet? DJ Maul's Dancin' Cantina Party
|
date Posted: Jun 17, 2006 11:51 AM
Sorry if Im reply hogging your post...  ...but this is really the first time I've ever had the chance to tell an author how I felt about reading his book "in person."
Anyway, I wrote a Review Of Betrayal if you're interested on reading the thoughts of a fan relatively new to the EU.
|
 |
Sluis Van Shipyardss
|
date Posted: Jun 17, 2006 7:04 PM
I haven't really noticed any "okays" in SW books. What REALLY bugs me is the use of "ducks" as in animals that are on EARTH, nicataine (c'mon!), and whatever hot chocolate drink they drink in the SW books!
I just read Betrayal, it was awesome! I was hoping to see the former Wraiths, but ending up with that, but in a surprising form... Unless I'm wrong about the name. 
|

 |
Allston "Pretty. What do we blow up first?"
|
date Posted: Jun 17, 2006 7:10 PM
v'TaiakEth said:
WHEN ARE YOU COMING TO UTAH? There are many very big fans of comedy and SW here and we feel very neglected.
I'd be happy to come to Utah, but I'm limited by various factors, chiefly financial. Typically, once I've spent my discretionary travel budget on San Diego Comic-Con, Gen Con, and Dragon*Con, plus one or two events close to Central Texas, I can then only attend other events if they handle the expenses. My entire book tour, for instance, is on someone else's dime.
In other words, if you can convince a Utah convention or other event to fly me out and put me up, the odds of my being able to visit are vastly improved...
|

 |
i12bajedi I'm Making This Up As I Go...
|
date Posted: Jun 17, 2006 7:45 PM
I lived my first 8 years in Texas, so I remember well the severity and suddenness of the storms.
As for "okay", I think it's fine in a SW novel. I think that younger characters would use it more than older characters, though. Sort of a rebellious generation.
 Actually, I had no idea that there were people out there that would make death-threats to authors. That's just plain scary! Maybe I should re-think my choice of future career...
I was at Star Wars Weekends when you were and I desperately wanted to buy a copy of Betrayal, but I had to buy the Limited Edition pins instead.  I'm glad to hear that it did so well, though, even without my contribution.
|
 |
jedimaster203 "I think I bent my wookiee"
|
date Posted: Jun 18, 2006 7:40 AM
A Star Wars USO tour would be sweet. Ya know, all the authors and actors.
Anyways, I loved Betrayal. I'm really looking forward to LotF now. Congrats, and keep it coming.
|
 |
O.J.
|
date Posted: Jun 18, 2006 11:53 PM
You know, Luke says "okay" three times in Empire when saying goodbye to Chewie.

|
 |
Allston "Pretty. What do we blow up first?"
|
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 9:42 AM
O.J. said:
You know, Luke says "okay" three times in Empire when saying goodbye to Chewie.
... which doesn't diminish my dislike of such usage one whit. 
|
| |
Dren Kre'lar My Pointless Points of View
|
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 1:10 PM
Okay
While I admit that there are some Earthisms that will knock me out of a sci-fi novel or a piece of fan fiction, for some reason 'okay' doesn't bother me. What bothers me is the word 'damn'. Even though the word 'damn' is used in the Star Wars (Uncle Owen's line about Luke following Obi-Wan on a "damned fool idealistic crusade", and Dexter Jettster's line about the Kaminoans being "cloners, damn good ones too"), when I see it used as a simple curse word, it pulls me out of SW mode because it just seems so Earthy.
|
| |
cbern Omega Squad's 5th member
|
date Posted: Jun 24, 2006 5:40 PM
hello mr allston
i just finished starfighters of adumar again, and i really loved it
you did a great job portraying wes janson, he is so funny
too bad whomever did the artwork for the cover didn't draw a batlle with blades
that would have been neat
i hope you keep writing, that is my possible goal-star wars writer
|

| |
jSarek jSarek's Infonet
|
date Posted: Jul 17, 2006 3:58 AM
I don't recall where I read this, but apparently "okay" is the most recognized word in the world (followed by Coca-Cola). At any rate, it's ubiquitous in English and highly known even among non English speakers. Additionally, it's function is very generic (as opposed to Coca-Cola, which applies to a very specific substance and is trademarked by a very earthly company). And no one alive remembers a time when it was a neologism. Why should the word be any more offputting than such English staples as "yes," "no," or "is"?
I also don't have a problem with old standbys like "hell" or "damn," and even when I see an Earthly animal like a duck or a dog, I just smile and add it to my mental Star Wars Zoological Catalogue.
|
- Please log in to post comments

|
|
 |