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Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date posted: Jan 20, 2007 7:09 PM  |  updated: Jan 30, 2007 7:46 PM
Plot, Subtext, Metatext, Transcendental Fable: Four Stories in One
This discussion about story and literature was born out of a discussion about "the Derrida joke" from The Official Abel G. Peņa Thread (Halagad Approved). I thought people interested in the philosophy of storytelling might find it intriguing.

I think literature should resonate on multiple levels. Whatever genre you're writing in, all the best literature borrows from the mystery genre: there's a game here, a puzzle, and the reader has to figure it out.

Some games are better than others, of course, even when from the same company. Imagine a jigsaw puzzle. You put it together, and it's aesthetically pleasing. But as you admire it, something suddenly strikes you as off. The anomaly attracts your attention, and suddenly you realize it's not so much an anomaly as--can it be? Upon closer inspection, the anomaly reveals characteristics of what might be a message, which you hadn't even suspected was there.

The reason I'm a great antagonist of conspiracy theories is because, as a writer, I know how supremely difficult it is to create a text that emulates the attractive, albeit imagined, mechanics of conspiracies, complete with a sense of secrecy, codes, and revelations. I think every great piece of literature is like Dan Brown's Da Vinci Code in a way, except that Brown's book uses a shifty shortcut, creating a character (the academic) that spells everything out for the reader. That's fine, of course, and his book is tremendous fun. But a skilled writer has other less blunt methods of getting his or her point across. Writing a Da Vinci Code-style book via a fusillade of mere correlating suggestions is more difficult, but also leads to a much harder wallop when the reader reaches the proper conclusions on his or her own. It's the difference between getting hit with a bullet and a buckshot. I think David Lynch is one of the finer storytellers competent at this method.

A writer should always try to be aware of the obvious story (plot, physical world), the underlying story or subtext (psychology, theme), and the metatext (fiction as fiction, not as a duplication of or analogy for the real world). For instance, in my Star Wars work, say Evil Never Dies, there is the obvious story of the history of the Sith (plot). Within that story there is the story of the evolution of the Sith (psychology), embodied in the journey of King Adas' holocron (an artifact of the oldest Sith incarnation) and the journey of the Dark Lady Lumiya (the most modern Sith manifestation). What does it signify when Lumiya obtains Adas' holocron? Does evil really never die? Does this question apply only to the Star Wars universe?

And then there is the metatext, which has to do with the flurry of continuity that gets shot through my work and how artfully I accomplish its integration. In regards to this story, there is generally a willful and self-induced break in the suspension of disbelief on the part of the reader because he or she who is capable of recognizing the sustained effort of the writer toward the creation of this particular story is naturally of a potential like mind, i.e. "You'ra speakin mya language." The reader has bonded with the writer in the same way two people who love the Beatles do.

But when you have a group that's so fluent in Star Wars lore, as many fans of the EU are, a writer may feel inclined to up the ante. That's why I don't only integrate an abundance of continuity in my work, but why I also reference Star Wars sources across the vast (and I mean vast) multimedia board and across the last three decades. From movies to television, radio to trading cards, books to comics, roleplaying games to video games, boardgames to toys, I've covered it in my literary corner of the Star Wars universe.

But every now and then, a medium of expression can do something more, as Derrida's philosophies suggest and the incidence of Kurt Godel's incompleteness theorem seemingly proves. There are instances in which a medium such as literature transcends itself via analogy and self-reference, in which the author him or herself now takes the initiative, actively coercing the reader to break the suspension of disbelief by aggressively reminding him or her that "this is fiction" either directly or via a collusion of coincidences that is too extraordinary to ignore. This is the moment where the author drops his guard and "shows his hand" with the intention of yielding an existential observation with frightening force. Though in order to maximize the potency of this revelation, the brutishness of the author's effort must remain as undetectable as possible--we human beings like to take credit for our own insights. We're talking about a magic trick, essentially (and I do mean trick). A proper analogy is to think of this as the author's "wardrobe malfunction" (and I do mean "malfunction").

This is then a fourth and perhaps final type of story within the obvious one, the transcendental fable (philosophy, metaphysical truth), and the moment of truth, so to speak. This is the most difficult kind of story to pull off, perhaps because it's the most meaningful, and when done properly the illusion of stumbling upon it should feel largely to be a consequence of the reader's effort, so as to produce the proper epiphanic effect (of course, this isn't to undermine the reader's own efforts and considerable intelligence, without which we couldn't even get started). This complexity is the reason why, A) this fourth story only occasionally appears in an overt way in my work, B) why, when it does, it's usually in the form of a "joke," and C) why I don't generally talk about it. Or in the words of Obi-Wan, "That is the reason why your sister remains safely anonymous...." (Luke: "Sister? Wha--" Ziiing!)

The Derrida joke in the Dark Forces Saga is one example, the Jeng Droga exercise is another, and the "History of the Mandalorians" has several (including the Nevoota Bee homage). With Evil Never Dies, the transcendental fable is among the more subtle, and has to do with my involvement in the introduction of Lumiya into the modern fan consciousness via my first published work, the character's unexpected resurgence in popularity thereafter culminating in her inclusion in a major new storyline, and finally the opportunity I had to "conspiratorially" tie elements from these two phenomena together in a new work... Evil Never Dies. Because of the personal nature of this fourth kind of story in Evil Never Dies, it's more subtly integrated than say the Derrida joke, but doesn't carry as much punch for its lack of universality: not everyone can identify with how lucky it feels to be a Star Wars fan-turned-author.

Of course, maybe it makes sense now why the undiscovered "transfab" I mentioned earlier as being my favorite is my favorite. Its very sustained hiddenness, despite the fairly reasonable clues I left implicating it, suggest it's possibly the best-executed metaphysical joke in my work thus far. I do believe it's living on borrowed time at this point, though I've already watered down its intended effect with all this blabbing. Such is the double-edged sword of literary theory. ;)

These philosophical games of course are only meant for those interested in playing them. They can, and are, just as easily ignored. ~ Abel G. Peņa

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date Posted: Jan 20, 2007 7:41 PM
Excellent read!

Thanks for sharing that!
  Michelle1968
M68- Star Wars Kid at Heart
date Posted: Jan 20, 2007 7:44 PM
Sigh... you are so dang interesting Abel.:)

naturally of a potential like mind, i.e. "You'ra speakin mya language." The reader has bonded with the writer in the same way two people who love the Beatles do.

This is me! Lots a love!
:x
Halagad
Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date Posted: Jan 20, 2007 8:17 PM
Excellent read!

Thanks for sharing that!


Glad you dig it, DJ! Now let's dance (doonch doonch doonch doonch...)

This is me! Lots a love!

That's you, ma belle. ;)
  rj_peters
Memos from the Imperial Finance Department
date Posted: Jan 20, 2007 9:53 PM
In my mid-20's or so, I read an Idiot's Guide (or some such) to Derrida in a bookstore. I didn't exactly get it all, but it was one of the few legitimate 'scales falling from my eyes' moments in my life. It led to me reading a bunch of other stuff about deconstruction. Again, not completely getting all, but being profoundly affected by it. It unlocked my mind to the possibilities that lie above and below the surface. So, whenever I see the name Derrida, it means a lot to me.

As for the transfab in END, ya got me. Great stuff though, AGP. Star Wars philosophy talk can be a bit repetitive, but this was greatness. You've got crazy range...
Halagad
Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date Posted: Jan 21, 2007 1:52 AM
We're in the same boat, brother. Deconstruction, and philosophy in general, is like math: if you're not studying it all the time, it's difficult to grasp and even harder to recall. But I definitely remember those mindblowing "speaking my language" moments while reading Derrida.

Incidentally, you might dig on this documentary on Derrida made just before he died.

As for the transfab in END, ya got me. Great stuff though, AGP. Star Wars philosophy talk can be a bit repetitive, but this was greatness. You've got crazy range...

Lavish praise rj, thank you.
  brooklooineghost
Just a simple mom trying to make my way in the (expanded) universe
date Posted: Jan 21, 2007 3:57 AM
Writing a Da Vinci Code-style book via a fusillade of mere correlating suggestions is more difficult, but also leads to a much harder wallop when the reader reaches the proper conclusions on his or her own

so true. this is why we leave this stuff up to you fine people, and lazily sit around impatiently waiting 'good product' :)

(con't)
  brooklooineghost
Just a simple mom trying to make my way in the (expanded) universe
date Posted: Jan 21, 2007 4:09 AM
bte, the levels of writing you described remind me of how teaching can be. You have the actual nuts-and-bolts info you are attempting to 'cover'; the larger theme that is it's undercurrent (say, cultural difusion in a history lesson, or nature vs. nurture in a psychology lesson); and the higher-level thinking that transcends the particulars (and the subject matter itself), which, to me, is more important than your subject matter, and even harder to pull off (for example, teaching kids to critically analyze primary documents, or synthesize their own ideas in a well-written essay).

(con't)
  brooklooineghost
Just a simple mom trying to make my way in the (expanded) universe
date Posted: Jan 21, 2007 4:15 AM
last, but certainly not least, sometimes there's the 'food for thought' you want them to arrive at on their own - for example, after teaching a world religions unit, i as their teacher would want them to watch later the news and question people whose faiths share more in common than not persist in killing each other in the name of religion. (believe it or not, they sometimes get there - sometimes not until weeks, months or even years later, but they do get there!) that fourth level is the stuff teachers dream of; it keeps us up at night, and gives us the energy to get up early every morning . . .

but i digress. and i apologize for replying like mad, but your blog inspired me, so i have only you to blame :)
Halagad
Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date Posted: Jan 21, 2007 12:56 PM
so true. this is why we leave this stuff up to you fine people, and lazily sit around impatiently waiting 'good product'

Ha! :)

but i digress. and i apologize for replying like mad, but your blog inspired me, so i have only you to blame

I'll never accept an apology for intelligent expression. Those were great thought-provoking posts. Teachers are one of the most valuable assets we have. Without them, I would've been incapable of producing these thoughts on writing. Many thanks. ;)
  rj_peters
Memos from the Imperial Finance Department
date Posted: Jan 21, 2007 5:19 PM
Incidentally, you might dig on this documentary on Derrida made just before he died.

Looks fascinating. May have to check that out. I'm starting to get that philosophy itch back now. May have to dive back in. Right after I finish Dark Empire II, of course...;
viagoangel2
Were Anakin and Padme' really one?
date Posted: Jan 22, 2007 10:25 AM
But a skilled writer has other less blunt methods of getting his or her point across. You are amazing! First of all, I am so sorry that I stumbled on to this so late, truly wonderful and very fascinating read.:)

Personally, I love it when I can be pulled into the story, becoming so capitvated and so engrossed that I completely lose sight of my own realities for the duration of the read. Writing to me should be like looking upon a fine or rare artpiece, the words should flow and mesh together creating a wonderous yet vivid world, connecting you with the author to view what he/she has only imagined or dreamt of.

Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us!
Angel
Jedi Master Mina
Another Galaxy, another time
date Posted: Jan 23, 2007 10:03 PM
I think David Lynch is one of the finer storytellers competent at this method.

I agree!! He's out there, but I love his work and he is a Master at it. ;)

The reader has bonded with the writer in the same way two people who love the Beatles do.

Hey, I bonded with J.R.R. Tolkien. I read "the Hobbit" so many times in high school, that I broke the binding. Talk about bonding with a writer. Also bonded with Marion Zimmer Bradly who wrote "Lady of Avalon". Both are excellent writers. See a theme in genre here? ;)


And might I add this blog is a mighty fine piece of work, Abel....Now that I know who you are...I'm such a blonde...:^O
Nar Cranor
Holochronicles: Continuity Hugs for Everyone!
date Posted: Jan 24, 2007 3:15 PM
Great blog, if slightly over my head (but only just). I know when I write my star wars fan comics and fan fic, I make an extreme effort to pull from all various corners of continuity, and reconcile material from all over. For instance, upcoming pages of our Tales of the Chu'unthor fan comic involve a scene with the Hutts meeting at the grand convocation hall. A hutt gathering was fun to write, because we are drawing on all these obscure hutts like Zonnos, Parella, Zorba, Jiliac, Aruk, and even the Shell Hutts and others! Also, I agree, having a mystery, something to figure out, is important. It makes the reader take an active role in trying to "beat you" in figuring it out before you reveal it.
Halagad
Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date Posted: Jan 26, 2007 6:01 PM
Writing to me should be like looking upon a fine or rare artpiece, the words should flow and mesh together creating a wonderous yet vivid world, connecting you with the author to view what he/she has only imagined or dreamt of.

Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us!


Thanks for reading, Angel. I think most of us who enjoy stories look for that same wondrous feeling you described.

I agree!! He's out there, but I love his work and he is a Master at it.

I still have to catch his latest film, Inland Empire!

And might I add this blog is a mighty fine piece of work, Abel....Now that I know who you are...I'm such a blonde...

Thanks for reading, Booty!
Halagad
Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date Posted: Jan 26, 2007 6:12 PM
Great blog, if slightly over my head (but only just). I know when I write my star wars fan comics and fan fic, I make an extreme effort to pull from all various corners of continuity, and reconcile material from all over.

The other day, I was captivated by the directness of some of my older writing, born from a simpler life philosophy. The trick is not to become so esoteric so that a story can no longer translate the gap between a storyteller's vision and the intended audience. A little pushing is good.

Also, I agree, having a mystery, something to figure out, is important. It makes the reader take an active role in trying to "beat you" in figuring it out before you reveal it.

Exactly. :)
  the_wookiee_has_no_pants
Pantless Wookiee
date Posted: Feb 03, 2007 2:20 PM
You know, I really enjoyed reading this entry. It's very interesting to go 'behind the scenes' of your work and to get to know some of the principles, ideas and thoughts you make. It's also nice to see that some of the stuff we know from the science of literature and narratology actually is useful after al ;)

There's almost a "community" feeling to the you'ra speakin mya language effect. Not only is there a feeling of bond between you and me when you incorporate, say, so stuff from SWAJ into your work, but it's almos like we belong to the same community. I suppose we do belong to the same SW-fan community.
Halagad
Only Sith Deal In Absolutes!
date Posted: Feb 04, 2007 1:52 PM
I think it may be more fundamental. Octavio Paz says that solitude is the profoundest fact of the human condition. This may or may not be true, but I think someone would have to have lived a rather meager life to claim he or she had never felt it to be true. I think when we find an author (or anyone, for that matter) that "speaks my language," we may more easily give in to the conviction that we are not alone, or as Yoda convincingly pronounced, "There is another." ;) Whether that language is corresponding to equivalent concepts, or even can, in each "speaker's" mind is somewhat irrelevant in this scenario: a hard line may be drawn between the quest for community and the impulse for truth.
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