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You Cannot Stop Me.....
by: maceyodaobiwonanakin
date posted: Jun 19, 2006 12:30 PM  | 
updated: Jun 23, 2006 3:26 PM
The New Rise of the Empire I
Now imagine the part when Mace,Kit,Saesee,and Agen go to arrest the dark lord of the sith but the jedi where difffrent.Suppose it was Mace and Yoda.They enter the chancellors office.Then Palpatine appears and says my friends the war is over.Mace says not yet.Then Yoda says under arrest you are.Are you threatning me master Yoda.Then Palpy stands and says the jedi will be no more igniting his red saber.
Then Yoda says Darth Sidious you are.Then Mace says the the plot to destroy the jedi is true.Then sidious pushes Yoda and Mace.Then Yoda pushes him back then yoda flips over to him cut his saber and says
A traitor to the republic you are.Then Sidious zapps Yoda back, laughs then gets one of his hidden sabers and battles Mace.Then Mace kicks him then punches him in the back.The darkside that has hidden you,unvield your true face it has.Then his true face appears.Then Yoda knocks him into a corner where he and Mace has him cornered.Mace raises his saber,and then yoda says not yet.Mace says why,Yoda says because the jedi way this is not.
Then Sidious chuckles and says fool.And then Anakin enters the room and says master yoda why are here.Then Yoda says why are you,supposed to remain in the council chambers you were.I just thought you need help master.Everything in control we have,now leave you must.NO.
What.You heard me NO...................Good Anakin use your hatred and anger it gives you focus Sidious says.No Anakin that leads to the darkside.Kill them Anakin.Not if anything to say about do I.Then Yoda pushes Anakin and flees the room.Then Yoda senses diaster on Kashyyyk [so he took his troops and left.]
Then Sidious tells Mace, he has abonded you join us.I will never fall to the darkside.So be it Anakin finish him,yes your highness.Then Anakin and Mace battle it out then Mace says Anakin dont do this young skywalker.for the sake of the jedi and the republic and for all that is right.Then Anakin pauses..................and thinks.And says its to late.Palpatine is my new master.Mace yells Noooooooooooooooooooo.
And like the speed of light Sidious cuts of Maces arm then Anakin swipes his legs tossing Mace on the floor.Then Sidious comes over to him and says pathetic jedi,then he cackles and shoots out thunderous bolts of lightning lifting his body out the window...........
To Be Conti......................................
and May the force and God be with us all.

  The Great Emperor5
Palpatine's Sanctum
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 12:51 PM
Did you have fun writing this? Quite an imagination you have there.
  The Great Emperor5
Palpatine's Sanctum
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 12:53 PM
Also, It seems highly unlikely a master strategist like Palpatine would blow his cover so easily, even when confronted like that. At least he withheld it more in the movie. But still, nice alturnative. ;)
usetheforce19
MasterMonkey13
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 12:55 PM
If up against Yoda and Mace, Sidious would die.

May the Force be with us all! God bless!
  maceyodaobiwonanakin
You Cannot Stop Me.....
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 12:57 PM
yeah i know.but this is happening like the order in the movie just a diffrent way ...
  vol8master
Vol8Master Master of the board
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 1:30 PM
I guess the Wookies would have been scroowed without Yoda
  snowhorse2001
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 7:47 PM
so ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......................... im confused , yoda gets up and just leaves to make his good 6 hour flight to kashykk in the middle of the fight of the millinea , cool imagination though
  maceyodaobiwonanakin
You Cannot Stop Me.....
date Posted: Jun 19, 2006 8:33 PM
where does a sith get their tatoos......................tatooine
  legodooku
date Posted: Jun 20, 2006 11:55 AM
Ummm.......right. Yoda would not have fled.
  darthseinfeld
date Posted: Jun 22, 2006 8:04 PM
Palpatine wouldnt have said the jedi will die, and revealed himself so swiftly, he still woul d have accused them of treason.
And no way would he have the nerve to fight those two in the same room, he would have used another strategy like fleeing and not revealing sithness, or calling the guards, he easily could have had them criminalised and use the assault as evidence.
The only way Jedi could have won is if they took HIM away with substantiall evidence, and making sure they were always in public so palpy couldnt use his powers.
Basically the jedi were all doomed, because no one would believ the jedi over palpatine.
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