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date posted: Jan 03, 2007 7:53 PM
Fire of Man
Whilst sitting at my computer playing Tetris I came upon an idea for a poem. I would like to share that poem with you.

When the fire begins to leap,
And the darkness is unfurled
The soul of man, so dark and clouded,
Begins to see the light.

Like the Veil of a mourning widow,
Or the hood of a man damned,
The darkness is lifted
And only light remains.

When the fire begins to fade,
And the embers lose their glow.
The world again is dark,
Grasped once more in shadow.

The darkness does not remain,
For when man has his chance,
He will rebuild his fire,
and watch flames begin to dance.

I hope you like this.

comments are appriciated.


  Bai Ahzur
Bai Ahzur's usless, but hopefully entertaining, yet somewhat eneventful, however rewarding, blog.
date Posted: Jan 03, 2007 8:00 PM
To the Mods.

I have'nt read the terms of agreement recently. Is this in violation of the contract. If it is, I will gladly retract it.

leia19886
Someone get this big walking carpet out of my way ...
date Posted: Jan 03, 2007 8:03 PM
Your poem is very good. If you should write another one, keep it written down at home.
You could make quiet a collection out of them.
  rj_peters
Memos from the Imperial Finance Department
date Posted: Jan 03, 2007 8:08 PM
Very nice. Keep the creativity flowing.
  Kenobi-fan
The Jundland Wastes Journal
date Posted: Jan 04, 2007 7:27 AM
...He will rebuild his fire,
and watch flames begin to dance...

Very ambiguous. Fire can mean a whole host of things. It can bring light but it can also bring destruction. It can represent civilazation but also war. As for Anakin, it could mean raging anger or fear while also symbolizing a torch holding the darkness back. Fire is a powerful symbol; one that leaves much to contemplate.

When you look into the darkness of the abyss, the abyss looks into you.
Friedrich Nietzsche
  Bai Ahzur
Bai Ahzur's usless, but hopefully entertaining, yet somewhat eneventful, however rewarding, blog.
date Posted: Jan 05, 2007 12:43 PM
I don't know what this poem means. Make it mean what ever you want it to.

Hey Kenobi fan, I haven't heard from you for a while.
I like fire. I like it alot.

I do think that I will keep this poem on my computer. I forgot to mention that this was the first draft. I think I will continue work on it. I might even make it into an epic saga or something.
Maybe not.

MTFBWY:)
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