I didnt have very many replies reguarding my first chapter, but the ones I did have all said they enjoyed chapter one. So I have gone ahead and published my second chapter.

I like this chapter a lot more than the first chapter mainly because you get to know the characters better. I disliked my first chapter because it lacked a lot of details I would like to go back and add. Mostly describing what the characters look like. I think chapter two really put in place what chapter one should have.

If you have yet to read my first chapter and are wondering weather or not you should waste your time with it I have added a short summury of what the final story would be about.
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If anyone has ever played Jedi Knight Jedi Academy my storie takes place a few years after that. The main character from the game, Jaden Korr, becomes good friends with my made up character from the book. My main character's name is Travis and he decides he wants to continue his training after his jedi father dies. While finishing his training he discovers secrets about his father with the help of some familiar star wars characters. Including Jaden Korr, Kyle Katarn, Luke Skywalker, and even Jacen Solo. A few other characters may fall into place, but those are the main characters I have choose to include. Near the end Travis is tempted by the dark side like every young jedi. Resulting of what he found out about his father may change where he ends up in the universe. Jedi or Sith?

Well heres a few links that may come to some importance to my fanfiction.

My blog entry about chapter one

Chapter 1

and of course....Chapter 2

So if you read any of my chapters let me know what you think!

enjoy,
Jedi Abba

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