Oooo! These are so good! I love how you really get into her thoughts...

These are really good. I soooooooooooo wish Padme had spilled her guts. She would have felt so much better.

is this an attempt to dissect the movie or are you going to add to the movie? not that dissecting it is bad just, make sure you dont get repetitive and tell what we already know. Nice job, this is quite good. keep up the good work

May the force be with you and may the Valar protect you(what a mouthful)

Even though Padme did like and respect Obi-wan, I could feel the tension between the two. Nice job, Misspadme. I can't wait too find out what will happen in her thoughts next. You give out each character's thoughts beautifully. Keep it up!!

vadersgirl33

Oh, Padmé is so good! Being able to hide her feelings from one who could read them so easily. Wonderful as always, MissPadme

Very well written. Powerful emotions expressed with few details. Worthy of recognition.....

Another great chapter!! I, too, could feel the tension here. Again, looking forward to the next one

I'm lovin this! Keep up the great work!

orcrist611

I'm not dissecting the movie, just adding a little by giving Padmé's side of the story.