Holy cow!! I could feel what Padme felt as I read this entry. This is good! . You get us into her mind and how she percieves things around her well. Look forward to more entries, my dear!!
Happy Holidays and MTFBWY.

vadersgirl33

You know how to keep us on the edge of our seats!!!! Incredible chapter, MissPadme!! Cannot wait for the next!!!!

Have a wonderful Holiday!!!

Ooh, I got chills!

I really enjoyed this one. I pictured Padme's leap from fearful, to wanting to take action, to realizing keeping the baby safe was more important.

I pictured the babie giving Padme the vision of the temple on fire.
Very good.
Leia

she felt invisible hands tightening around her throat.
Woa. I like that you gave Padme some premonitions. Makes her seem a little Jedi-like!

This is a great story, but I have some amazing news:

THE TITLE OF THE SEVENTH HARRY POTTER BOOK HAS BEEN RELEASED!!!!!!



"This is a happy moment- the happiest moment of my life."

And the best Chanukah present in all my 15 years on this planet. Force bless J.K. Rowling.

vadersgirl

There's about 11 more chapters to go.

leia1988b

Interesting way of looking at that scene.

ewanandhaydenfan5

In my fanon, Padmé is somewhat Force-sensitive though she is untrained and definitely not as powerful as Anakin or Obi-Wan.

anigirl3

Oh yeah? I betcha my story's WAY better than that Rowling chick's .

And thanks to everyone else who commented .