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Rive's Uncharted Settlements
by: Rive Caedo
date posted: Apr 25, 2006 10:26 PM  | 
updated: Apr 27, 2006 3:22 PM
Why Was Padme's Lightsaber Purple?
(---- Previous Edition --- Rive's Prequel Alternate Universe Project --- Next Edition -----)
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Hello and welcome to Edition 4 of "WWPLP?"
Potential commenters keep in mind that I'm aware that the "real" Padme was not a Jedi, did not have a lightsaber, and it was not purple.
This is part of my project to create an alternative storyline for the Prequels, most likely in webcomic or comic book format...
You might do well to use that new navigation bar I put in at the top of the entry to go back and view previous entries if you missed them.
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So taking a step back from starships from a moment (because Darth Vader completely showed me up :) ). He did give me a bit of advice at making my lines look a bit better post coloring though. So we now enter Stage 2 of attempting to draw in the Clone Wars animation style: Semi-Half-Almost Decent.

So, though there's no background (the backgrounds in Clone Wars are very simplistic anyway), here's an example of a step further down the line in the process of assembly. At least it's better than the incomprehensible storyboard stage. :)

It's starting to look a bit more professional... I hope.
The word bubble style is highly temporary I think. The font (plain ol' classic Comic Sans MS) will likely remain however.

The idea in the second frame was to show emphasis on his lop-sided evil grin... But Clone Wars style Dooku has an extremely large neck... So it didn't work out as well as I hoped. I probably will end up showing his whole face in the final version... Or making it an extremely small frame and showing only the grin.

Senator Dooku
Senator Dooku - Hologram Edition
Senator Dooku - Special Edition

As always, Faf-Diction on-site = Bad
So you'll need to head on over off-site if you want to continue to hear me ramble on.

Entry Continued in Production Diary Type Thing #3

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  Yoda's Pink Uncle
date Posted: Apr 25, 2006 10:37 PM
looking good.

YPU out
  Marvolo7
Marvolo's Misanthropic Musings
date Posted: Apr 25, 2006 10:52 PM
Rive, this is looking awesome. Dooku as a Senator is a great idea. It would be cool to have him as the political idealist that he is first described to be. I was actually disappointed that he was in on Sidious' scheme (for the most part, I bet he wasn't counting on being decapitated by Anakin). It seemed more fitting that he would be a Separatist leader, who saw the Republic as corrupt and wanted change. I think it somehow diminished his character when it was revealed that he too engineered the war so that the Sith could take over.

And now I'm just rambling about Dooku. Carry on, Rive, carry on.
The Stooge
Star Wars Joke-A-Day
date Posted: Apr 25, 2006 10:54 PM
Coolness. Blasphemous, of course, but also coolness. Just keeps getting more and more ti-- tantalizing.

And the Ackbar cracked me up.
  Darth Rex0
So be it....
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 5:06 AM
Does this mean no Maul? Darn. He fought cool.
  luuke.skywalker
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 5:40 AM
:|

No Rex, I think it means more Maul. And I thought the cloe-up of Dooku's big neck worked just fine. :)
  Darth Rex0
So be it....
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 6:32 AM
I think it means more Maul

We'll see. His last blog says its up in the air. Alot of people wanted more Maul and more dialogue for him. I just wanted him to fight more and maybe earn that reputation we think he has.
  Rive Caedo
Rive's Uncharted Settlements
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 6:50 AM
It would be cool to have him as the political idealist that he is first described to be...

Marvolo, you seem to be quite happy staying inside my head. So please remember to clean up before you leave.

Coolness. Blasphemous, of course, but also coolness. Just keeps getting more and more ti-- tantalizing.

I think that's the only time I'll get 4.2 words to describe this

Does this mean no Maul? Darn. He fought cool.

Well I just put Dooku out of the running for Sith Lord of the week... So yes, like Luuke said, this probably increases the odds of Maul getting in. I don't think I can just use Palpatine.
  Vader of Clubs
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 8:03 AM
I was gonna ask you if you planned to run into the OT or if it might lead elsewhere . . . running into the OT is better, though - it means you have to aim for that ending, rather than just going where ever you please.

I have questions, plot questions, many Grievous related, but I ain't gonna ask them 'cause I'm hoping you'll get far enough with this that I won't have to :D Not that I've stopped thinking it sucks of course.

The Dooku grin works pretty well, I rekon, but if you're doing storyboards you might wanna judge for yourself if a full head would be more approprate.
hansgirl3
Invoking the Squee
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 11:27 AM
cool B-) That's all I'm gonna say...
  DarthVicomte
Vicomte's Blog Extravaganza (Now Defunct)
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 11:43 AM
Vadder is 1337, u is teh loser.
  ThrawnRocks1
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 12:52 PM
He fought cool.
He did fight cool.

Marvolo, you seem to be quite happy staying inside my head. So please remember to clean up before you leave.
So is there a party going on in there now? Are the rest of us invited?

I liked the special edition the most. Master of the obvious makes his voice heard.
I might suggest putting a litte more emphasis on Dooko's sneer. Maybe more detail? Dulling out the rest of the panel around it?
Am I making any sense? At all?
  Master Andy Luke Skywalker
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 3:10 PM
"It's a trap!"
Geez Rive, first having the words "purple" "lightsaber" and "Padme" to get a popular blog, and now having Ackbar in your pics. The Ackbar gag has to go into the how improve your blog list. Nice Dooku, and I'm glad you are NOT making him a sith to shake things up. I'll check back tomorrow. :D

Master Anndii(Andy) Luke ;)
  JadenNightsaber
THX 118?
date Posted: Apr 26, 2006 4:45 PM
I'm surprised that your really putting this together. You seemed so ehhh in your first blog. I hope you keep this up. It's all looking good.:D I look forward to the next version.

Rive brings hope to the fans!!
Darth Vader
Meditation Chamber
date Posted: Apr 27, 2006 4:10 PM
Okay okay. I was just trying to help. Geez... ;)

Great Dooku, spot on!
  Rive Caedo
Rive's Uncharted Settlements
date Posted: Apr 28, 2006 3:57 PM
Okay okay. I was just trying to help. Geez... ;)

And it's still awesome. I intend to link that baby a few more times just to show how much my work pales in comparison :D

Great Dooku, spot on!

Well to be actually spot on I'd need some of those fancy vectors and paths. I'll take what I can get though I suppose.
Thanks. :)
  Darth Jeffery
date Posted: Apr 30, 2006 7:55 AM
Lol!!!! The special edition has got me laughing my @$$ off!!
  Darth Jeffery
date Posted: Apr 30, 2006 8:06 AM
could use a rancor though...
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